Monday 15 August 2016

Writing skills

The Lions writing group have been learning how to use commas in their writing to join ideas together. They now use these well! They are also enjoying reading each others writing and looking for their learning goals in each others stories. Well done team! You can check out part of Meisha's writing here.

3 comments:

  1. I like that you have used a conjunction Meisha. Some super spelling attempts too. I'm wondering why they were wearing life jackets? Had they fallen out of a boat?

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  2. Hey Meisha. Looking forward too reading your next story! From Annie and her Dad ;-)

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  3. Hey Meisha. Looking forward too reading your next story! From Annie and her Dad ;-)

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